Comments on: Would this keep you reading? http://reading-1.com/2009/07/27/palm-reading/142/ Blog about the joys of reading Tue, 15 Nov 2011 01:17:18 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: kittydoormat http://reading-1.com/2009/07/27/palm-reading/142/comment-page-1/#comment-675 kittydoormat Sat, 15 Aug 2009 00:58:55 +0000 http://reading-1.com/2009/07/27/palm-reading/142/#comment-675 <a href="**"></a> It's poetic like someone said, but the sentence fragments would drive me crazy.

It’s poetic like someone said, but the sentence fragments would drive me crazy.

]]> By: tina y http://reading-1.com/2009/07/27/palm-reading/142/comment-page-1/#comment-674 tina y Thu, 13 Aug 2009 15:35:03 +0000 http://reading-1.com/2009/07/27/palm-reading/142/#comment-674 <a href="**"></a> Yes, it keeps me reading to find out what is going on. Great beginning.

Yes, it keeps me reading to find out what is going on. Great beginning.

]]> By: Rose S http://reading-1.com/2009/07/27/palm-reading/142/comment-page-1/#comment-673 Rose S Tue, 11 Aug 2009 13:50:01 +0000 http://reading-1.com/2009/07/27/palm-reading/142/#comment-673 <a href="**"></a> Yep.

Yep.

]]> By: yo dog http://reading-1.com/2009/07/27/palm-reading/142/comment-page-1/#comment-672 yo dog Mon, 10 Aug 2009 23:19:44 +0000 http://reading-1.com/2009/07/27/palm-reading/142/#comment-672 <a href="**"></a> wow i love that it is very touching i would want to read more really good

wow i love that it is very touching i would want to read more really good

]]> By: Just Ryan! http://reading-1.com/2009/07/27/palm-reading/142/comment-page-1/#comment-671 Just Ryan! Mon, 10 Aug 2009 19:06:41 +0000 http://reading-1.com/2009/07/27/palm-reading/142/#comment-671 <a href="**"></a> Suprisingly, no. It's a great passage, definitely, but its got a lot of "frillies" and "poofs" that don't have to be there. sure, i like it when there's a lot of despriptive adjectives and stuff, but at times like these sometime it's okay to say: She fell. Seems strange, but I'm a journalism major...so what do i know, right? au revoir. :-)

Suprisingly, no.

It’s a great passage, definitely, but its got a lot of “frillies” and “poofs” that don’t have to be there.

sure, i like it when there’s a lot of despriptive adjectives and stuff, but at times like these sometime it’s okay to say:

She fell.

Seems strange, but I’m a journalism major…so what do i know, right?

au revoir. :-)

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