just a few corrections, some wording changes, good essay.
Not only has the television been a target for media bias, but also the magazines, internet, and newspapers have become targets as well. Magazines, like Newsweek or U.S. News and World Report have a more liberal bias than conservative. For example, Laura Bush appeared on Fox News to speak about the actions of Newsweek magazines in 2005. Newsweek had reported a story about how the Koran had been abused by U.S. soldiers in the past. According to newspaper articles, “She urged the magazine to let people in the Islamic world know they had made a costly error and to be more positive about America’s troops” (Harris, par. 2). Laura Bush appearing on Fox News, with the purpose to attack only the Newsweek magazine is juvenile on the government’s part. With the appearance of Laura Bush in Fox News having been approved, “Fox has become a central hub of the conservative movement’s well-oiled media machine” (Ackerman, par. 3). One of the reasons that United States government is terrified to broadcast Al-Jazeera news network over the United States is that the news network will show a more liberal bias and inform the public about real cases in the war in Iraq. Al-Jazeera has been broadcast all over the world, but not in the United States, “Al Jazeera’s Arabic service has been demonized by the U.S. government due to its disconcerting on-the-ground reports from battlefields in Iraq, Afghanistan, Palestine and Lebanon” (Hanley, par. 15). The only way that United States viewers can watch Al-Jazeera is by “paying $6 a month for the full channel to be streamed to their computers. Others are accessing individual broadcasts via the video-sharing site YouTube” (Hanley, par. 20).

To be Blunt, this is soo poorly written and has sooo many errors, its unbelieveable. i’ve done some.

Not only IS television a target for media bias, but the magazines, internet, and newspapers have become ONE as well. Magazines like Newsweek or U.S. News and World Report are more liberal than conservative. A GOOD EXAMPLE OF THIS WHEN Laura Bush appeared on Fox News to speak about the actions of Newsweek magazines in 2005. Newsweek reported a story about how THE Koran was abused by U.S. soldiers in the past. According to newspaper articles, “She urged the magazine to let people in the Islamic world know they had made a costly error and to be more positive about America’s troops” (Harris, par. 2). By HAVING Laura Bush appear on Fox News, with the purpose to only attack the Newsweek magazine, is juvenile ON the government’s part. With the appearance of Laura Bush in Fox News approved, “Fox has become a central hub of the conservative movement’s well-oiled media machine” (Ackerman, par. 3). One of the reasons that United States government is terrified to broadcast Al-Jazeera news network over the United States. For the reason that the news network will show more liberal bias and inform the public on real cases about the war in Iraq. Al-Jazeera has been broadcast over the world except in the United States, “Al Jazeera’s Arabic service has been demonized by the U.S. government due to its disconcerting on-the-ground reports from battlefields in Iraq, Afghanistan, Palestine and Lebanon” (Hanley, par. 15). The only way that United States viewers can watch Al-Jazeera by “paying $6 a month for the full channel to be streamed to their computers. Others are accessing individual broadcasts via the video-sharing site YouTube” (Hanley, par. 20).