Yaknow asked:


i just wrote this and its suppose to be like a writing sample and im a little nervous about it, i was wondering if anyone could read it and give me their opinion. tell me what they likes, what to change, and grammerical errors(because im sure there are some) id be thank full!
http://me-and-myselfand-a-blog.blogspot.com/
it’s also suppose to be in 3rd person, so if you could just double check for me that it is. I thought i knew what 3rd person was but, i got a little nervous i was doing it wrong
angela, i know what you meanthat annoys me too i tied to but the blog thigy i posted on didnt have a tab key, but you write i should of just spaced them out, ill go fix it right now, but it is fixed on my copy.

Tags: Blog Blogspot, Proof, Tab Key