anytime u want to proof read something read it slowly – one word at a time and out loud so u can hear what has been written. that way u will be able to catch more errors.
1. highwayman is one word here and in the second paragraph 2 words and 1 again in 3. is this what u want? a period after dramatic. tender, tim. at THE climax comma
2. needs a : after the second were.
3. the central
good so far but i think more detail is needed throughout. watch ur tenses, u have were and is. if the paragraph is past tense leave it past tense. good luck