Archive for the 'Proof Reading' Category

Sunday, September 27th, 2009

Proof Read The beginning of my Science Report?

illianaisbored asked: Its about puberty.
……..If you know me then you must have already realized that I am very hairy. Well I wasn’t always this abnormally covered with hair. It all started around the age of nine. It started attacking me as if I were Chuck Norris. The cause? Puberty! If you haven’t already experienced puberty [...]

Sunday, September 27th, 2009

will someone come over here and proof read my questions/answers, it seems i can not spell right tonight?

Hailey Jo asked: or remember to use spell check!
I have never been to a Bon Jovi concert, but would absolutely love to go to one!

Sunday, September 27th, 2009

could you proof read this paragraph?

Wak Attack asked: could you proofread this
1.The Setting of The Highwayman is in a small town controlled by British soldiers’ during the American Revolution. The story is based around the old inn where Bess lives and the road that passes by it.
The Mood of the highway man is very somber and dramatic as you read [...]

Saturday, September 26th, 2009

Can someone proof read this? (Urgent)?

sprivxd3 asked: Hi, My friend Zeus has a college entrance paper to write, but english isn’t his first language so he needs it read over thoroughly within the next 4-6 hours
It needs to be checked for run on sentences, faulty pronoun references and other complicated things like that
thank you all so much!
His future is [...]

Friday, September 25th, 2009

Proof read french?

Julia asked: This is a letter i had to write about a make believe vacation.
Salut ! Mes vacances d’été étaient grandes. J’ai fait beaucoup de choses. Je suis allé à Floride avec ma famille et mes amis. Nous y est resté pour à peu près deux semaines. Pendant que [...]

Friday, September 25th, 2009

Can u proof read this essay and comment and change my errors/ use beter word if needed?-Part 2?

HELP??!!!!??!?! asked: http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AtRLD9ZzUWdEnV7khUBZm9Psy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20081015021303AARNXUR
- tat link to the first part of my essay ( introduction and 1 body paragraph … if u want to read it of course)
Unfortunately, during the past few years — especially these two years–i, myself, had many difficulties that influenced me to become a compulsive exerciser which “cause long-lasting health problems…”(58). During [...]

Friday, September 25th, 2009

Proof read my 9 sentence Essay PLease. EASY 10 Points?

skillz708 asked: Going to church, my family is enjoyed. Since the beginning of time people always had faith and believed in god or a godly figure. The first reason people must go to church is because it gives them faith. In my opinion having faith, is a life essential, everyone must believe [...]

Thursday, September 24th, 2009

Can someone please proof read my small paragraph thanks?

Fred asked: Feel free to edit or do anything to the paragraph to make it more appealing to the read.And sorry for any lousy mistakes I lost my whole document kind of ****** and stayed up late at night trying to get it back. Thanks for helping
I love to spend time with my [...]

Thursday, September 24th, 2009

Proof read my french? ?

Emily J asked: Bonjour! So I have an oral presentation in French next week, I just wrote my thing, I’m in french 2 x so, I was wondering, does this flow/work or do I need to change it some how. Any advice is great! Thanks here it is (Note, I will not put accents [...]

Tuesday, September 22nd, 2009

Proof read my spanish paragraph please?

Asian Persuasion asked: Please check for spelling, grammar, and improper idioms. Thank you!
Cuando yo tenía cinco años, fui al zoo en Washington, D.C. Estaban muchos animales allí. Vi a elefantes, leones, y pingüinos. Después de almorzamos, quise ver los pandas, pero mis padres quisieron ver a los tigres. Cuando anduvimos por la casa de panda, [...]