Archive for the 'Proof Reading' Category

Tuesday, September 22nd, 2009

can anyone proof read/opinion on this?

Yaknow asked: i just wrote this and its suppose to be like a writing sample and im a little nervous about it, i was wondering if anyone could read it and give me their opinion. tell me what they likes, what to change, and grammerical errors(because im sure there are some) id be thank full!
http://me-and-myselfand-a-blog.blogspot.com/
it’s [...]

Monday, September 21st, 2009

Proof read Spanish Paragraph (Very short)?

Runnergirl asked: I’m in Spanish three, we have only learned simple future and the preterit. Could somebody check this for grammar errors? We also haven’t learned the difference between para & por, or reflexive verbs.
Here is is:
Dia de Los Reyes
(Day of The Kings or Three Kings Day)
El 6 de enero es el Dia de Los [...]

Monday, September 21st, 2009

Can you please proof-read my language exercise homework, on correcting sentences?

Ashraf asked: The exercises asked to correct the sentences. Here’s what I could do; it is possible that my answers have mistakes.
Question no.1.
a. The last place is between you three.
Ans. ?
b. He was stood at the corner of the street.
Ans. He was standing at the corner of the street.
c. What is the use of me [...]

Monday, September 21st, 2009

Proof read my letter of intent for school?

Cupkate asked: The goals I would like to accomplish in ARV280 are simple, I would like to learn as much as I can on how to build an amazing portfolio so I can be successful at getting a job in the photography field. I hope to personally achieve in ARV280 the confidence to walk into [...]

Sunday, September 20th, 2009

Proof read? Please=)?

kjdlove93 asked: so this is my almost finished cause and effect paper on religion.
any comments on it?
if you see something wrong, point it out please?!
I’ll give points=)
Presbyterianism
Presbyterianism is one of the many branches of Christianity. This religion was formed during the Protestant Reformation in the sixteenth century. Presbyterians trace their origin to John [...]

Sunday, September 20th, 2009

Proof read this please. 10 points for the best help. Thank you?

Lunar asked: Dear Ms. Smith,
Thank you very much for taking time out of your busy schedule to talk with me about the position of Executive Assistant/Associate Grants Administrator at the Fund for Global Human Rights. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.
It was a pleasure to discuss my future [...]

Sunday, September 20th, 2009

proof read?

who cares asked: Not only the television had been a target for media bias, but the magazines, internet, and newspapers have become a target as well. Magazines like Newsweek or U.S. News and World Report are more liberal bias than conservative. For example, Laura Bush appeared on Fox News to speak about the actions of [...]

Friday, September 18th, 2009

Could someone proof read my German paragraph?

Lyla Lovett asked: Don’t bother telling me where accent marks go. I’ve got that under control, I’m just too lazy to type them in here lol. I’m looking for corrections on spelling, word order, and how to best get across my idea.
Deutsche trinken wasser. Amerikonische trinken Cola. Deutsche Rad fahren. Amerikonische fahren. Deutsche sehr [...]

Friday, September 18th, 2009

Proof read my french sentences?

eeee asked: I’m writing a children’s book for french class.
Si je donnais trop bonbons à un panda, il aurait mal au ventre.
S’il avait mal au ventre, il faudrait aller à l’hôpital.
S’il fallait à l’hôpital, il volerait une voiture de sport.
S’il avait une voiture, il faudrait mettre le contact.
S’il mettait le contact, il accélérerait trop [...]

Thursday, September 17th, 2009

Can you proof read my resume I just wrote ?

asicsrocks2120 asked: I am looking for an entry level electrical engineer position or a entry level test engineer position . This is what I have so far. Can you please tell me if I can improve anything , even if it’s a word.
SUMMARY Entry level electrical engineer with 4 years experience in [...]