Archive for the 'Proof Reading' Category

Wednesday, September 16th, 2009

Proof read my cover page. what do you think of it?

Jess asked: I was hired at Firstsource Advantage in February as a debt recovery agent. Since then I have enjoyed the environment and the professionalism of the company. I feel that I have the commitment and motivation to contribute to Firstsource Advantage.
I am scheduled to graduate from Hilbert College next month with [...]

Tuesday, September 15th, 2009

Can you proof read my resume I just wrote ?

asicsrocks2120 asked: I am looking for an entry level electrical engineer position or a entry level test engineer position . This is what I have so far. Can you please tell me if I can improve anything , even if it’s a word.
SUMMARY Entry level electrical engineer with 4 years experience in [...]

Tuesday, September 15th, 2009

Proof-Read my Theme Paragraph? Tell me if its good or what to add?

Cozy:) asked: In the short story “Raymond’s Run,” by Toni Cade Bambara, the main character learned that even if you want something really bad, you should always think of others before yourself. Squeaky was the fastest runner at her school, she was probably the fastest runner she knew, and when she saw Raymond running along [...]

Monday, September 14th, 2009

proof read a spanish paragraph please its about gays in america?

P B asked: En la Declaración de la independencia afirma que “Nosotros creemos ser evidente en sí mismo, que todos los hombres nacen iguales y dotados por su Criador de ciertos derechos inajenables: que entre estos son los principales la seguridad de la libertad y la vida, que constituyen la humana felicidad.” Sin Embargo, esta [...]

Saturday, September 12th, 2009

Can someone proof-read my story for English?

bulletprooflonliness asked: I just finished a picture prompt story for english (grade and could someone read it and just give me some suggestions? thanks a million!!!!
The night was dark. A cool, quiet summers night in the forest. The only audible sound was that of the tiny feet of Evan and Melanie scampering among [...]

Saturday, September 12th, 2009

proof read and edit my paragraph please1?

riddhi_416 asked: Our life-support system’s health is maintained by all the species that make-up the biosphere—from the smallest to the largest (our biodiversity). The survival of all these species are interconnected and dependent on each other. Bacteria and insects break down organic material to produce soil and nutrients so plants can grow. Plants provide oxygen [...]

Saturday, September 12th, 2009

Proof read spanish sentences?

sweetmomusic asked: HI! I was wondering if this is correct?
Rewrite the following sentences, replacing the word in “**” with the one in parentheses. Make all other necessary changes.
1.Van a comprar esta *maleta* azul. (platos)
Van a comprar estos platos azules.
2.Ese *hombre* es inglés pero aquél es español. (señoritas)
Esas señoritas son es inglés pero aquél [...]

Friday, September 11th, 2009

proof read my essay?

sly_2314 asked: Barack Obama
Barack Obama will make an outstanding president. He is level headed and has the nation’s best interest at heart. Even though I don’t agree with some of his views, he has the same opinion on most of the issues that I do. What makes him stand out from Hilary Clinton, and John [...]

Thursday, September 10th, 2009

PROOF READ MY ARTICLE?

Kampex asked: My article is about how robots should take over the teaching role of teachers ( i know )
i don’t think i structured it verywell
sounds like its missing something
10 points if you help, thnx alot
Brains vs. Batteries
Problematic Teachers
When students get a bad mark, they usually blame the teacher. That [...]

Wednesday, September 9th, 2009

Can you proof-read my paragraph?

Katie W asked: OKay, I’m in 8th grade and we are supposed to write a scary story, I’d like someone to read through my first paragraph and give me some advice on how I can change it! Thanks!
Boom! The thunder roared across the dark sky, over and over again, it never stopped. Angolie wove [...]