Archive for the 'Proof Reading' Category

Wednesday, September 9th, 2009

can you please proof read the end ofmy essay?

LOVIN*JOE*J asked: During the process of this I-search paper I would like to discover some things about this occupation. This includes salary, I think that the average salary for this occupation is $60,000, but I am not really sure. Next I would like to learn some terms that are part of a radiologic technologist, I [...]

Wednesday, September 9th, 2009

Will you proof read my essay?

raisinette asked: Please tell me if this makes sense, This isn’t all of it but I didn’t think anyone would want to read the whole thing. This is just the first part, the rest is about 10 pages long. I still have to write it.
The controlled mode, which is also known as Command Detonation, the [...]

Monday, September 7th, 2009

Proof read please, thank you?

I_am_pure_energy asked: As a child safety Advocate, Scott Cirillo the writer/ creator of Mr. No-No the #1 Proactive Child Safety Character and Book in America is well known for teaching children, parents and teachers across the country proactive child safety. With the collection of wonderful people all over the country sharing their safety mishaps and [...]

Monday, September 7th, 2009

proof read my essay please really careful?

bhupo s asked: You can walk through any school in this nation and ask any student if they know the story of Rosa Parks. Most students would say that she was the African American woman who did not move from the front of the bus to give up her seat to a white man. The [...]

Saturday, September 5th, 2009

Hi.somebody plz proof read for me.plzzzz?

kriss asked: have wrote a summuary on an article, and i know i have written in such a panic conditon that there a many grammar and sentence structue error..plz plz change it for me….plz i really beg you bcoz my assigment is due tommorow…..
In “Hollow Claims about Fantasy Violence,” Richard Rhodes argues that violent entertainment [...]

Friday, September 4th, 2009

can anyone proof read this and make it sound better please ! i will choose a best answer =)?

lovesya0404 asked: Dear Ms.___:
Hi my name is ___, I read your job posting for a Personal Assistant with much interest; was refered by the Youth Empolyment Service and would like to be considered for the position.
As a recent graduate of ___and a member of Business Academy I was able to gain few experiences [...]

Friday, September 4th, 2009

so i was reading this book and it got me thinking?

Mary asked: my friend is writing a book, story, whatever.
and she gave it to me to proof-read and it has me thinking…
its about a 16 year old dating a 32 year old..
theyev been sneaking around since she was 14..
and are now in love.
their planning on movin in together (story cuts off here)
and at one [...]

Thursday, September 3rd, 2009

Please Proof Read (Two paragraphs)?

illianaisbored asked: Staying true to yourself is one of the most important values that you could have. I have chosen Michelle Obama’s quote because both her and I agree that personal integrity is a fundamental law in life. This ideal is tested many times in high school and throughout life in general. People, prejudices, and [...]

Wednesday, September 2nd, 2009

Can you proof read my resume I just wrote ?

asicsrocks2120 asked: I am looking for an entry level electrical engineer position or a entry level test engineer position . This is what I have so far. Can you please tell me if I can improve anything , even if it’s a word.
SUMMARY Entry level electrical engineer with 4 years experience in [...]

Wednesday, September 2nd, 2009

Can someonre proof read my Process Paragraph for me?! Please?

MPL88 asked: Hi. Well i had to write a process paragraph for my english but she just wants us to turn in the Final Copy. I have no one to check and it and was wondering if one you guys could help me out and read it and tell me what i could do to [...]