Friday, September 25th, 2009
Can u proof read this essay and comment and change my errors/ use beter word if needed?-Part 2?
HELP??!!!!??!?! asked: http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AtRLD9ZzUWdEnV7khUBZm9Psy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20081015021303AARNXUR
- tat link to the first part of my essay ( introduction and 1 body paragraph … if u want to read it of course)
Unfortunately, during the past few years — especially these two years–i, myself, had many difficulties that influenced me to become a compulsive exerciser which “cause long-lasting health problems…”(58). During [...]