Thursday, September 24th, 2009

Can someone please proof read my small paragraph thanks?

Fred asked: Feel free to edit or do anything to the paragraph to make it more appealing to the read.And sorry for any lousy mistakes I lost my whole document kind of ****** and stayed up late at night trying to get it back. Thanks for helping
I love to spend time with my [...]

Tuesday, September 15th, 2009

Proof-Read my Theme Paragraph? Tell me if its good or what to add?

Cozy:) asked: In the short story “Raymond’s Run,” by Toni Cade Bambara, the main character learned that even if you want something really bad, you should always think of others before yourself. Squeaky was the fastest runner at her school, she was probably the fastest runner she knew, and when she saw Raymond running along [...]

Wednesday, September 2nd, 2009

Can someonre proof read my Process Paragraph for me?! Please?

MPL88 asked: Hi. Well i had to write a process paragraph for my english but she just wants us to turn in the Final Copy. I have no one to check and it and was wondering if one you guys could help me out and read it and tell me what i could do to [...]