Sunday, September 27th, 2009

will someone come over here and proof read my questions/answers, it seems i can not spell right tonight?

Hailey Jo asked: or remember to use spell check!
I have never been to a Bon Jovi concert, but would absolutely love to go to one!

Friday, September 25th, 2009

Proof read french?

Julia asked: This is a letter i had to write about a make believe vacation.
Salut ! Mes vacances d’été étaient grandes. J’ai fait beaucoup de choses. Je suis allé à Floride avec ma famille et mes amis. Nous y est resté pour à peu près deux semaines. Pendant que [...]

Tuesday, September 22nd, 2009

can anyone proof read/opinion on this?

Yaknow asked: i just wrote this and its suppose to be like a writing sample and im a little nervous about it, i was wondering if anyone could read it and give me their opinion. tell me what they likes, what to change, and grammerical errors(because im sure there are some) id be thank full!
http://me-and-myselfand-a-blog.blogspot.com/
it’s [...]

Friday, September 18th, 2009

Proof read my french sentences?

eeee asked: I’m writing a children’s book for french class.
Si je donnais trop bonbons à un panda, il aurait mal au ventre.
S’il avait mal au ventre, il faudrait aller à l’hôpital.
S’il fallait à l’hôpital, il volerait une voiture de sport.
S’il avait une voiture, il faudrait mettre le contact.
S’il mettait le contact, il accélérerait trop [...]

Saturday, September 12th, 2009

Proof read spanish sentences?

sweetmomusic asked: HI! I was wondering if this is correct?
Rewrite the following sentences, replacing the word in “**” with the one in parentheses. Make all other necessary changes.
1.Van a comprar esta *maleta* azul. (platos)
Van a comprar estos platos azules.
2.Ese *hombre* es inglés pero aquél es español. (señoritas)
Esas señoritas son es inglés pero aquél [...]

Wednesday, September 9th, 2009

can you please proof read the end ofmy essay?

LOVIN*JOE*J asked: During the process of this I-search paper I would like to discover some things about this occupation. This includes salary, I think that the average salary for this occupation is $60,000, but I am not really sure. Next I would like to learn some terms that are part of a radiologic technologist, I [...]

Friday, September 4th, 2009

can anyone proof read this and make it sound better please ! i will choose a best answer =)?

lovesya0404 asked: Dear Ms.___:
Hi my name is ___, I read your job posting for a Personal Assistant with much interest; was refered by the Youth Empolyment Service and would like to be considered for the position.
As a recent graduate of ___and a member of Business Academy I was able to gain few experiences [...]

Wednesday, September 2nd, 2009

Can someonre proof read my Process Paragraph for me?! Please?

MPL88 asked: Hi. Well i had to write a process paragraph for my english but she just wants us to turn in the Final Copy. I have no one to check and it and was wondering if one you guys could help me out and read it and tell me what i could do to [...]

Sunday, August 30th, 2009

proof read my first two paragraphs for my essay?

rennie asked: In life we are faced with difficult situations. We have the choice to fight for what we believe in or simply keep our heads down as if it did not affect us. There are consequences for either action that is chosen. When trying to stand up for what we believe in, we could [...]

Thursday, August 27th, 2009

Can someone proof read my simplified Chinese?

whitetiger1914 asked: This was an assignment for school I did. I just wanted to make sure I did the correct sentence structure and the right words and everything. Can someone who reads simplified Chinese help me out? Just let me know how I did and where I made any mistakes.
Thanks
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